Critique: Stimulating brain to lower pain

Today’s poster comes from kindly contributor Emma Taylor, who was generous enough to share her honours project. Click to enlarge!


Quick thoughts.

  • Good structure that lets me know I read in rows.
  • Visual hierarchy is generally good.
  • Looks crowded. Would benefit from more space around everything, but particularly between text and edged of blue boxes they are in.
  • Underlining text in discussion would probably be better as bold or italic text.
  • Another editing run to cut more text might help. (I know, that bit is hard.)

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